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Post by Dovahkiin on Nov 9, 2008 23:45:02 GMT -5
~Prologue~
An Introduction to War Narator: In the plains of Rubinia, a country on the continent of Gemanina, a young boy falls unconcious while traveling. Little does he know that he is about to meet many people who will help him win a war. A war of many comrades and enemies. A war where man, beast, and anything in between shall unite to destroy evil and save the good people of Gemanina. ~End of Prologue If you want to be in the fanfic, PM me. |
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Post by BB on Nov 11, 2008 18:29:38 GMT -5
Love the name.
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Post by Ruby on Jan 16, 2009 15:54:11 GMT -5
Whoah. This looks.....awesome! I can't believe no one's posted for months!
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 16, 2009 21:24:44 GMT -5
I know. I guess people just *sniff* don't understand me. *cries*
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Post by Ryo on Jan 16, 2009 23:01:37 GMT -5
You haven't a chapter yet.......A prologue can only do so much.
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 24, 2009 15:49:57 GMT -5
Ok, I'm going to make Chapter 1 now... ~Chapter 1~
The Fight Begins Narrator: Aquos, a young tactition from the land of Emeraldion, is traveling across Gemanina to find work. Walking in a field in Rubinia, he becomes dehydrated and passes out. ???: A-are you okay? .....I guess I'll just take him to my hut to help him. Narrator: This girl is Lumania. She is the only person that lives on the field besides her brother, Sol. Lumania: Sol, open up! I found someone who collapsed on the field! Sol: [opens the door] Ugh...Why couldn't you leave him there? Lumania: [puts Aquos down on a bed] He should be okay if he stays out of the sun. Narrator: An hour passes and Aquos wakes up. Aquos: W-where am I? Who are you? Lumania: My name is Lumania, and this is my brother, Sol. Sol: Whatever... Aquos: What happened? Sol: You collapsed on the field. You've been asleep for an hour... Lumania: Well, what are you going to do now? Aquos: I guess I'll leave. I'll be taking my tomes and head out. Lumania: We'll make sure you go out all right. Narrator: As Aquos, Lumania, and Sol leave the house, a group of bandits are closing in on the field. Bandit Leader: Ugh, that army wiped most of us out...You guys okay? Bandit 1: Yeah... Bandit: You bet, boss! Bandit Leader: [points to house on the field] You guys see that? That's our target. Wire 'em out and take their stuff. Bandit 1: But why a random hut in the middle of nowhere? Why not something a little less, you know, weird? Bandit 2: Shut it, Barlow, Don't question the boss! Barlow: Make me, Carl. Carl: I told you not to call me that! My name's Carlito now! Barlow: Whatever...Hey, Phoenix, like I said before, why a hut? Phoenix: Those guys definitally have weapons if they're all alone, and what do we have left? Frickin' axes... Carlito: But boss, what about- Phoenix: No, Carlito. Now, let's charge 'em! ~End of Chapter 1 Chapter 1 Characters:
Aquos
Lumania
Sol
Phoenix(Bandit Leader)
Barlow(Bandit 2)
Carlito(Bandit 3) |
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Post by M on Jan 24, 2009 19:20:27 GMT -5
Chapter 1 is Awsome! Yay Phoenix is in it!
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 24, 2009 21:05:10 GMT -5
I feel inspired all of a sudden. ~Chapter 2 Part 1~
Bandit Assault Narrator: The group of bandits appear on the plain. Lumania, Sol, and Aquos are saying their goodbyes. Carlito: HEY! YOUS GUYS! WE'S GONNA KILL YAS, A'IGHT? Phoenix: This is why you shouldn't be with us, Carlito...Always blabbing to the enemy. I shouls stab you with my axe right now. Carlito: N-No, boss! Phoenix: Good boy. Now, let's hope they're not trained well in weaponry. Aquos: Oh crap, bandits. Do you quys have any weapons you can use to protect yourselves? Lumania: Yeah, I have a sword. Sol: I have a lance and a bow. Which one are you going to use, Aquos? Aquos: I can't use weapons, but I can direct you in combat. Sol: What kind of help is that?! Lumania: Don't question it, Sol. Okay, Aquos. Show us where to move. Aquos: Lumania, Sol. Wait for them to come to us. Phoenix: Come on, guys! Narrator: The bandits run forward to Aquos, Lumania, and Sol as Sol disobeys Aquos and runs toward the bandits. Lumania, scared for her older brother, runs to protect Sol. ~End of Chapter 2 Part 1 |
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Post by M on Jan 24, 2009 23:27:20 GMT -5
A Fight is about to begin...
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 25, 2009 19:54:01 GMT -5
~Chapter 2 Part 2~
Bandits of Emeraldion Narrator: The bandits led by Phoenix are attacking Lumania, Sol, and Aquos. Aquos: Sol, stay back and shoot at them with your bow! Lumania, Cover Sol in case the bandits go after him! Narrator: As he's talking, Phoenix moves towards Lumania and slashes at her. Phoenix: Such a beautiful girl, too bad I have to kill you. Narrator: As Phoenix rises his axe, an arrow gets shot through his hand. Phoenix: GAH! Infernal boy! You'll die instead! Sol: Pffft, you wish. Narrator: Phoenix runs at Sol, and Sol stands there with his lance. Aquos: Lumania, now! Lumania: Got it! [slashes Phoenix from behind] Narrator: Phoenix falls to the floor from the slash. Sol: Who's next?! Aquos: The other two are retreating. What should we do with- Phoenix: [sits up] I-is that you...Aquos?! Aquos: W-who- Phoenix: It's me, Phoenix! Aquos: P-phoenix?! I thought you were killed with the rest of them! Sol: What's going on here? Lumania: It seems like they know each other. Aquos: Guys, Phoenix is my brother. Lumania: Told you, Sol. Sol: Whatever... Phoenix: Well, I have nowhere to go now... Aquos: [sighs] You can come with us. Lumania: Huh? Where are "we" going? Aquos: It obviously isn't safe here, so we should travel. Sol: ...Alright, I'll go. Lumania: B-but, Sol! Sol: I made my mind. Lumania: Fine...I'll go too... Narrator: So Aquos, Phoenix, Lumania, and Sol started going on their great journey across Gemanina. ~End of Chapter 2 Part 2
Chapter 2 Characters:
Aquos
Lumania
Sol
Phoenix
Barlow
Carlito |
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Post by M on Jan 26, 2009 17:21:55 GMT -5
Awsome fanfic! but...why are we the only ones posting?
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 26, 2009 17:25:22 GMT -5
I guess other people just overlook it or are too lazy to post.
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Post by M on Jan 26, 2009 18:07:36 GMT -5
Oh Well by the way I heard the word lance is a weapon but what is a lance? I was hoping to use it for my future fanfic.
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Post by Dovahkiin on Jan 26, 2009 20:00:40 GMT -5
It's another word for spear I guess. Same concept, pole with one sharp, metal end.
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Post by M on Jan 27, 2009 19:11:51 GMT -5
It's another word for spear I guess. Same concept, pole with one sharp, metal end. Oh Okay so I guess I'm still using the word spear in my fanfic. |
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